World unknown - Reviews

nice opening. I like reading the script of a famous writer ... I continue reading. I support you. continue please

I have read mtl. 10/10 can recommend. Thanks for those providing the Chinese names; I appreciate it. One factor I dislike about Webnovel is that they stopped providing the Chinese names for the novels they are translating or are about to translate. Although I do understand piracy has become a massive problem, I condemn Webnovel for being unable to understand that due to their lack of sympathy for readers, many of these novels get forgotten and the authors uncredited (since Chinese has many interpretations and translating an author's name in English is kind of pointless as the definition becomes tempered with and tracing the author in CN is near impossible). For example, I have seen tens of novels that never progressed from the initial stages of pilot reads to translation and got forgotten. At the moment, Webnovel almost never listens to advise from their userbase and I think this is despicable and Webnovel honestly need to change up their game plan.

I got to chapter 34 and can say that the writing has improved, and seems like a good story so far. I am looking forward to how this book will go.Overall I feel that the world building and character development is done just right for the beginning of the book thus far.As for story development I personally like the path taken where there is a goal seen already for the plot, with an easy path to continuing further.

A story to be this short and having all the qualities of a novel. The characters development was good and the story unravels smoothly with I'm media res as a method. Overall a wonderful love story?????

"You are real I doubt sometime. I believe you are an angel fallen by mistake on Earth" He whispered with his seductive voice I feel shyer now. His marron eyes with melting golden color scanned me from head to toes with only one word filled in his vision love. He was looking handsome as always. He was wearing expensive navy-blue suit showing his bulging muscles, a light stubble was shrouding his strong razor cut jaw and smooth chin. My pulse were unstable and I was barely breathing he looks in breathtaking. His slight gelled hairs left him looking reasonably presentable an eye peeling piece.

Will there be more chapters? Just discovered this novel and binge read it and absolutely love it lol

Please update more author

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In order to not cast suspicion upon himself, commander Higgs gave orders to search for the captain immediately.

Dusk: You have to clean your mess too Rias...or else

Yukasi Kitaterima : Kasir

Mal thought it was extremely weird, but he couldn't give it any proper scientific explanation. It was as if what Yasmin had told him had some truth to it, despite his common sense telling him that everything she said was either a delusion or a lie.