World of Realms - Reviews

its good up to chapter 600 but then rhe plot digress instead of only fighting the dark race in the other world it became a scifi genre that already involves planet, planet federation, alien etc etc, also the racism in the later chapters is quite high

picking this up was a waste                                                              

I wasn't going to do a review because it feels like cheating but all the others writers say they did it so here I am. I was surprised by how many people were interest in this strange story I came up with to join the competition. I didn't even get it out in time too enter so I had written it off. Yet now it's way more popular then Iron Will Reaches the Heaven which was the story I wanted to write most. This gives me mixed feeling but I'm glad people are enjoying this. I literally have no plan and am just making it up as I go for this one. Please stick with me on this unusual adventure!

The translator is spamming random chapters with multiple chapters index. I don't know if this is TL revenge or what's going behind the scene but this story is broken at this point.

This is my favorite story to read at the moment so good in fact that it is the first one to make me pay for chapters cause I want to read it so much.

Hi, this is one of my favorite kingdom building novel. This one is very action packed and emotional. I suggest everyone should give this novel a try

Well I drop the story about chap. 120The story starts good with store bullding and has a fun undertone.But the biggest negativ point is the system spirit his so cald Mother, after about 100 chap. Her character is so overbearing that you just can't take it anymore.Than she tell him to kill, and forces the regrets off a other person on him to get him To wake up and take charges of his life.... As if there is no other method out there.... And he just takes it and is OK with it when she has clearly tried and manipulated him.So after 100 chap. The fun and games end and your are trust into a murder fest.I don't chare for the later chap. Anymore his mother's character is just to much for me together with his passiv Betamale attitude and the massiv shifts in the tone of the story in not even 5 chap. I'm dropping this **** like it has the plague.

Damn I have to do all five stars cuz the rating is too low ?.

"Could Master have been part of that experiment?" I asked.

"Yeah, you know," Minerva replied. "Just wanted to try something different than usual."

"I never had the time to do it…"

I'm a new writer this is my first book please tell me how I can improve my writing