World Shift - Reviews

I'm loving this. I hope Damien and Sierra have a happy after.

Yeah it's me shameless rating five stars.                                                                                                      

An editing would be appreciated, I can’t understand how you can post a story with so many grammar faults.Even I who is from a country where English is difficult to learn wouldn’t make that many mistakes.The story is good, the world background excellent, the characters could be better written but still acceptable, the story is finished so no need to wait for update.Other than grammar, the story is a gem that would probably have a deep success if it was readable.

The story's good but a book cover would be nice. Plus, based on one of the chapters, the Marques guy likes her right? So if they were to be a couple later, why isn't it mentioned there? Or perhaps will we have a new male lead as well?

"Bayu..papa punya sesuatu.." kata seorang lelaki.

" Ikaw ba ang magiging bagong kasambahay ?" unang beses na narinig nya ang boses ni Nicholas .

He saw every tiny detail of her movement.

-Contact accepted-

Maria: Nothing is wrong with the manual, but elements you cultivate are a problem, I found a good spot for you to live, but getting better materials, you need rare or unique materials.

I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed

Hi author! i'm at the 75 chaptet and I wanted to know when Chari will come back? Since I know it's an MC it's impossible that he end at volume 1. Otherwise it's a great and refreshing story! i'm in into duo MC who are brothers right now, and you're novel is what i needed! By the way sorry for my english, i'm not used to write comments.... Anyways thank you again for this story, and I hope to continue following you on your journey!

super ? amazing unexpected start Good twists