Women in Internet Era - Reviews

Hello the book was really good. I really liked the character designs. The plot was very good to you don’t know what could happen next.      

très amusant, le pouvoir est original et permet beaucoup de possibilité, j'ai lu d'une traite les 60 chapitre, j'ai vraiment hâte de découvrir la suite.Je recommande vivement.

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i love the concept of the story pretty much everything for someone who doesnt really like killing and just want somw world building kind a book. everything is good but the mc, he is kinda weak in character. there are parts that are completely hilarious. but i think you better explain why his farmer is different not just directly ending it as a bug. the storyline is getting boring too, atleast put some detail about what his doing or making. i think that you lack that part, all you want to show in your book how op he was and lazy but the title is about his farmers atleast give us some excitement of making this and that. its really lack something in that part. and the mc? he acts kinda stupid and annoying. atleast give him a personality that is firm. the story is a little weak too. have some terrible situations that makes the people in the story panic about their situation. just giving a beast tide is okay but not actualy saying what happen or their situation is not okay. and directly saying a lot of them dies a single night when you said its only difficult if they get stronger, i get it that its because of a certain system managers that the difficulty went up but it still unreasonable when the mc is not even facing that much. give us a feeling that the difficulty went up, not just a list of a lot of deaths. it made me like its not another news. you lack expressing that part

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Review after 5 ChaptersWriting style follows meta of the genre. For a cultivation theme, it's fastpaced but not in an overpowered sense.Could use a character development but it's still new so it has potential.If this could remain faithful to its culture, it can be a good historical fiction.Good work.

The story is good to read, the concept of chakra is quite fascinating.And the story is quite slow try to speed up the pace.l loved it, but try to release more chapters.

Review at CH162.. The beast taming aspect of the story is done really well as Karl tries to navigate the path to making his tames better. The writing and world development overall dont leave much to be desired. The pacing kind of feels like we're following a slice of life with some combat here and there. My main complaint so far would have to be the character development.A lot of the characters, to include MC, seem rather flat and dont have much of a personality. Other than being stronger, it doesnt seem like the MC has any sort of goal nor do we really get a peek at his mentality. The tamed monsters are arguably more entertaining and individualized than any of the human characters we meet so far.I really enjoy the novel and wait for my chapters daily, just hope we can get more full bodied characters

It's amazing how I still maintained my professionalism despite my next job being a joint one with HIM.

[Skills]: [shumpo (C)] [kitchen (A)] [delimited fields (D)] [fencing (C)] [hiding mana (E)] [lightning magic (C)] [meditation (D) ] [reinforcement (E)] [performance (A)]

"Hmm? Is there a problem?" The bearded man notices the frustration on the naked man but responds with an amused look.

change into the fire lizard ( have insufficient mana)