Within Our World - Reviews

Fast-paced and average. Sounds like a worse copy of some good novels I like in similar setting/system. His passives is a plot armor that appears when he needs it as well. Only the thing someone else mentioned - that schemes and lies are shown in a unique way - is perhaps something worth reading for, but I am not interested in this atm.My opinion is subject to change in future if I ever decide to pick it up again. But I will pass on it for now. The novel didn't captivate me at all.

Its a meh fanfic. Nothing really different from other MMO fics out there. Only thing I find disappointing is the MC suddenly trusts Silent Night right after he was betrayed. Then she takes up as much screen time as our MC where I gave up continuing the fic. Freaking romantic interests killed the story for me.

The beginning was terrible and forced humor. But it does get better after 30 chapters or so. I want this Translated just for the sake of who the Author is. Sure his previous work wasn't the best but I can also see improvement in his writing. Characters feel better and more alive.

this novel is the best author i really like this and it has all the elements I like (eg:World travelling, cultivation, harem ,system etc) idk why it is underrated but I just want to say that to the author Thank you for this wonderful novel and please don't drop me this ??

Bad grammar but not to the point of being unreadable. Good ideas for the erotic contents that cover various fetishes, but they're told in a way which is lack in details. As a result, readers can't get immersed enough to fully enjoy it.

A great story with a main character which is not overpowered from the second he the sword.                                                .

Absolutely enticing and we'll written novel. I love that there's no system or powerful drugs to unnaturally boast the MC. just some talent mixed with hardwork,a mature mind and past experiences. Can't wait to see his journey dealing with everything in his rise.Absolutely love that his black just makes it more relatable. very curious if you'll tackle some of the problems "black athletes" come across in the sports world especially football ⚽️. And the pressure or lack of it some of the truly very top players face. eg messi,cr7,lebron,Tom Brady,pat mahomes,mbappe,Otani etc.the pressure of winning individual trophies but not yet team success or vice versa.Only wish their was more updates. thanks for the beautiful story hopefully it's written to completion. I'll be here till it ends.

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Man, I have been waiting for this novel to be translated. I hope the translator will stay strong to the end and complete this novel. So far the translation has been very good.

the whole people don't die thing was a bad gimmick cuz it only comes to bite the mc. while Liam the delusional is able to kill someone day one of his reincarnation. at about 170 I realize that the author lost the plot. Liam and Lucas get so much screen time it's become there story and lith is just an observer. I don't like skipping parts of stories but the author literally put 2 chess games back to back. again Liam and Lucas are getting to much screen time and Liam should be dead by now. I can't honestly keep reading this woth how little of a role the mc plays in his own story.

While thinking "the sheet I cleaned with great trouble must be replaced again, huh?

This novel is so awesome and is perfect for a game element and weak to strong lover like me. Right now this novel is in its first hundred chapter and it's in developing period but I know that this novel WILL become awesome from experience and very excited for the new chapters