Wip - Reviews

Its a pretty good read that has u intreagued the whole time. Sometimes u think u know what's about to happen but they add a twist in a chapter to keep u wanting to read more of it then ever before

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This book is one of my favorites and one of the best I've read so far.i like the story and the world so far. I can't wait to see what the next familiar will be I love dragons will it be another dragon or something else?

Another great book by lord sixth, i highly recommend it for those harem lovers, if you have not read it as yet, be sure to read it, great waifus, amazing plot, OP MC and neat writing style. READ IT!!!

An interesting book I'd say... No much info dumps and easy yet good grammar usage.For now, I do not know if the MC will later evolve into a human, but I guess I've got to be patient with the author.Just keep a steady update time and try your best... I highly recommend this book to other readers.

Go! Go! Whoo!So you want to be a Pokémon Master?I got 2 B the one, the only one who canWithstand the test 'n B the best.I got 2 strive, keep up the drive,B a Master.It takes a different kind of skillAnd I won't stop until150 Pokémon are mine.I must define the art of capture (of all Pokémon).2 B a Master... Pokémon Master!I will B writin' a brand new chapter!Pokémon Go... Go... (everybody sing)Na na na na na na na naNa na na na na na na naIt's all about the evolution of the PokémonNa na na na na na na naNa na na na na na na naPokémon Go... Go... PokémonGot my badges and my Poké Ball.Got my buddy Pikachu 2 help me try2 catch 'em all (Gotta catch 'em all!).Yo, it's all about the evolution of the PokémonThe training attaining N' bein'Part of the phenomenon.B a Pokémaster icon... Ha!Team Rocket will B long goneBut first U gotta know about the different types:Grass, Fire, Ground, Steel, Electric,Water, Rock, Flying, Ice, Normal, Bug,Ghost, Fighting, Dragon, Dark, and FairyBut don't forget about Psychic!2 B a Master... Pokémon Master!I will B writin' a brand new chapter!2 B a Master... Pokémon Master!I will B strivin' to be the greatest Master!Pokémon Go... Go... (everybody sing)Na na na na na na na naNa na na na na na na naYo, like I said before, it's all about the evolution of the PokémonNa na na na na na na naNa na na na na na na naNa na na na na na na naNa na na na na na na naGreatest master of PokémonMmmm... Somewhat impressiveNow you've reached the PlateauBut not yet a heroR U ready 2 meet and defeat... The Elite?Can I expect survival against your Rival?And remember... Gotta catch 'em all!Show me what you've got!Pokémon Go... Go... Pokémon Go!2 B a Master... Pokémon MasterI will B writin' a brand new chapter2 B a Master... Pokémon MasterI will B strivin' to be the greatest Master.Pokémon MasterThe greatest MasterPokémon MasterI will be writin'The greatest ChapterSing itNa na na na na na na na...Greatest Master of Pokémon

If you wanT To know truly my opinion then i will say author destroyed his good story.  1st of all can you clarify us that are you writing novel pr biography?  when i read i don't get the feling of reading novel i feel i am reading a biography. and every character is behaving lije a robot.  even though they are showing emotion i have to say i fell you didn't get depth of a character &  the story is getting rushed. power system is also have a problem you can understand by going ch 8. & technic how they work you didn't say. you didn' t use system efficiently.  lastly world background?  there is none .  which empire? who rule what?  it might have at letter ch but sorry i got bored of reading same theme.  but if you solve every problem then i can say this will be   a greate story..

"Yes, Sensei," Nichiren nodded, and made a hand-sign.

It took an enormous amount of energy to summon him here yet he's here with only a small strand of magic going to him instead.

Minato teleported with naruto and ryu  in his arms and threw away the blanket  

In the end, Shirou wasn't a person that could live with the thought of harming others. As such, the problems regarding relationships were to be solved amongst the women.

"damn when are this guys gonna come? i didn't know at what time they were going to come so i wake up earlier and been here waiting for 2 hours already, are they gonna come late? well whatever I'll be counting cars for the time being," said Rex