Will of Immortals - Reviews

Men like alpha Jasper always so strong and that makes him likeable. I can't wait for him to see Anna and treat her the way she deserves to be treated d

网恋女友竟是九天神凰      the raw                                                                                                                                          

Too racist for my taste but will continue reading it for a bit it I drop it. It might change. Joking about 911 is not very nice either. It is Chinese author so no idea if they joke about it there often but for western readers it might be insulting.

More interested in system related...Hope this one will more surprising than others...?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

The story is written well, the characters are unique and original and you can easily see the effort the author put into this novel. I highly recommend giving this novel a try!

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a very good novel with comedy, power ups,  face slaps (literally) and well all other elements you would find in a good harem novel..love it

Its your amazing Author again, You guys must have noticed that I have changed some content and made little tweaks to the previous chapters. I have done this because the previous chapter were lacking in both quality and quantity when it came to words and plot etc.. so I had to take the bitter pill and I have been improving the previous chapters for the past 48 hours making sure there are no errors.

As the sleazy, ill-intentioned perverts closed in on her like a pack of hyenas over a piece of juicy meat, the slim and pretty (if flat chested) T-Rex in a girl's body smiled back pleasantly at them.

I wanted to die.

"let me review it first ." Miray quickly snatched the file from Rita's hand.

"Kau sedang apa?" seseorang menyapanya. Setelah ia membenarkan posisi payungnya, barulah ia mengetahui siapa yang menyapanya.