Why does the world looks like some fanfiction? (Hiatus) - Reviews

Early chapters are good but later ones started to taper off and what you read on the earlier chapters that got you interested starts to go down the drain. Character development was good but it got annoying and repetitive in later chapters.Some later chapters starting from 50 seemed to be forced, I don't know if it is due to some changes but it got dull later on too.

Very good novel, it does not deserve its rating.                                                                                             

This is a one of a kind isekai story ? I find myself laughing at times, and sometimes I reread the sentences to be sure wtf did I just read and it turned out to be what I was thinking in the first place lol I freakinnn love the concept, unexpectedly the CEO title, RPG game and harem genre can match! It's good. Keep it up ???

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The story is great, but one thing that bothering me is why the fck there is R18 tag when there isnt any smut scene as far as i read this novel?

great story-line ..looking forward for some more amazing stuff...  the personality of the main character was weird , however i like it . i would rate it with five stars because the story is pretty unique and amazing . keep it up and upload more chapters asap  *saranghae*

Good job so far with the writing! I think that you are off to a good start as an author and am absolutely looking forward to reading more of your releases!-dff123P.S. Let's be friends on discord ;)

It’s meh at best. Author used some very powerful writing in the first chapter. After that turns into a very stereotypical boring Japanese style protagonist. Very much told not shown the story. And it’s really hard to feel invested in the plot, world or characters after the first chapter.The premise behind the novel is great, and I would have absolutely adored this novel had it been more human, raw, personal or portrayed any emotion at all. It’s like this the reason people love goblin slayer but detest all of those 3 star rinse and repeat anime out there. No one wants to read about a super benevolent always happy perfect protag in a super innocent happy world. It’s just too hard to relate or connect to those characters.Anyway author well done on the concept though. Really powerful concept and you really nailed the first chapter making the MC a real person. After that he stopped being a human

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"What?!I don't have time to lunch with you!"

we have read about people in different kind of guild, and one manga where the mc is an assasin, but i have never read one where he/she was part of a league. lets say he has that typical sad background, gets adopted into the league, makes some achivments and maybe elope with someone he shouldent and run away, trains just to come back and get revenge later on.

"What now?" She grumbled, stomping back.