Who Is The Main Character ? - Reviews

read smth else don't consume trash because u can't find any good novels anymore

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Ntr ntr..well the author warned it..but mc is garbage and doesnt care if gets ntrStory was going good for few chap but immediately declined after ntr..its not like i hate mc being ntr'ed but the mc himself is scum and everything incl plot declined after he gets ntr'ed

I love me some grrr..?. Lovely build, amazing book, amazing ideas, very entertaining and great communication. Am still going and it gets interesting even more, no slacks.

Hello! I think you need to add more description of your main three heroes early on like in the first chapter, or all the characters for that matter besides the minor ones. Otherwise the story is well written, just needs some minor editing.

"We should always go here together then." Bella said with a warm voice.

As soon as Rider had left, Shuhang trekked towards Ophis with much difficulty. No surprise there seeing as there's a hand shoved in and prodding around inside his soul. Well... Its his nascent soul, but it has a close enough link between it and his 'True Soul' that affecting one would do the same to the other. No... They are one and the same at this point.

As Luix made his way towards the forest he didn't  know that somewhere in this universe a region's top secret discussion was being held.

Little by little, with Silena's help - Annabeth saw how Amirah managed to cajole most of the campers to her side, help out through the whole process from the garden outside to the painting of the structure in order to finish the project as soon as possible.

-Allows the user to freely use spear.

"Is there something wrong with me being a rank-E?"

"Tracking you down was a pain." Violetta continued. "As soon as I left you at that orphanage, I forgot all about you. Your existence was a nuisance.  But then I was told I needed you. I searched Eastern Europe for years until I discovered you'd been adopted and brought to America."