I like the story... It was interesting to the point that I'm looking forward to it... I was wondering who will be the man who will catch her attention and will find her interesting....
There's nothing special about this novel, pretty seen this story lines in a lot of novels before. I don't know writers no longer term to build up new storylines.
Very good chapter. I read them all and decided to small little review over the all for the time being. I must say you have very little grammar issues for a first time writer. In addition to fact these errors do barely anything to distract from the story. If you don't mind a proof reader I wouldn't kind helping you.
i haven't read the story, but you had me at cats. im giving full stars because i had the almost the exact same idea a year ago minus the elemental cats. i get to be lazy now and not write the story and read someone elses stuff.
Nice... I like the story. I hope you won't drop it midway....................................................................................................................................................................................................xpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpx.
"You plan to start working too, right?" she asked, making Kyle look into her eyes. They shared the same blue eyes and facial features, only that his mother's features were more feminine and softer.
