Chapter 1928 now.I loved the story and still do but I find that after going through ALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL (hundreds upon hundreds) of chapters DEDICATED TO THE ONE SCENE (the war) I’m tired of the too many details and drawn out fights that seem to never end with an annoying amount of unnecessary details that the Author seems to LOVE to provide us with. I know that the author probably just wants to provide world building or immersion or whatever… but is it too much to ask that we get straight to the point (aka the main story line with her facing her actual rivals) and not spend 100s of chapters dedicated to a TEST that sets the stage for the main scene? There are authors who have said more with less if you know what I mean. With how far I’ve been I would be absolutely horrified at the PROSPECT of re-reading this story for funzies. Honestly would be a nightmare. Love the story but the plot progression — or over-abundance of details I should say — scares me and I find myself skimming because honestly? Most of these details are not even necessary. You think they are in the moment. But they’re really not. Some people might like the “side plots” (if they can even be called that) but I don’t.Love Ainsley and the characters and where this story is going but we could get their a liiiiiittle faster with some cuts.
