My first impression with Idols is that they are cheesy and much of an eye candy than substance. True, maybe they can make someone smile but for my taste I prefer Western Pop Culture and JPop more. That is before I read your story. Since this story tells about more on management, also, had some historical references which I like the most, your story caught my eye. It is unique in its own right or maybe it is just me since it is the first time I read such story. It captivates me because of your main character's perseverance in life which we all should have in our endeavors.As a reader I am entertained and interested to read more of your story. It is lighter compared to the stories I read. I may give another review soon when the story progresses. There are few errors in writing I have observed but it is not noticeable. Aside from that everything looks okay. Thank you fro inviting me to review your work.-Cipher Log