Voidborn Cultivator - Reviews

Complimentary first review from the Author:The story is set in a world where magic exists, and each Magical Element has a Holy Church, with the Holy Church of Light being the most influential and strongest. The only element which doesn't have a Sacred Church is the Element of Darkness as it was destroyed, being thought to be the work of the Devil. Since then, all Dark Mages were hunted by the world and killed whenever discovered.In this world, Gabriel wakes up with the Holy Element of Light, but due to circumstances, he wakes up with a second Element, Darkness which brings him at an unexpected crossroads. The story will be an epic filled with mystery, adventure and actions.Please give it a try.

Update or give the book to someone cause I really like it and want it to continue until its complete. Please don't let it die. I'll give you my free passes?

The writer sounds like he knows the general storyline already, because the synopsis is basically begin>early>mid>late part of the story, or it all happens early xDeither way i'm excited for it, hope it gets picked. but it won't, they never do :(

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I am caught up with the Translations! Hear me out! This was not meant to be a serious story but a funny one.This is actually not bad. Yes the beginning was terrible, also terrible world building... I've read 60 chapters but it feels like 200 with little progress. But read this for the Characters! Honestly, there's still hope Author can turn this around. It's frustrating because there's too little information so I can't really ascertain anything. To like this Novel is a gamble. It'll either be BS conclusion or not.

Really good chapter one, haven't seen any mistake. Good grammar and unique permise                                                                                 

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A small backpack made it company, and as she opened it and emptied it of its treasure a plastic bottle, the kind any vending machine would spit out after being bribed with a few coins, saw daylight. It was accompanied by a lunch box and a few napkins onto which she placed chopsticks and a mug to hold them down in the weak breeze.

Napatingin ako sa kanya "crush ano yun?"

"Sit. Stop barking at the Inuzuka woman. You sound like a bitch." Looking at Lady Inuzuka. "I didn't mean anything by it. Bad choice of words." Kai-La said scratching his chin. Looking at the Hokage he continued. "I say we help the Mist village. I have a little business near there. Having me go and help should help reduce the need to expend any ninja. Besides.." looking at the Hyuga head "It would be best. That way it keeps me from killing a majority of these useless Hyuga. Your kind makes my skin crawl for some reason. I think its the eyes. you look like those soulless dolls!"

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