Villain.Deku - Reviews

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Good story, grammar mistakes are there but, np as long as story is good it can be corrected, yes try this novel it's also a reincarnation type. Yes I promise that you won't feel disappointed.

Bookmarked, will read when it hits 50 chaps. Before that mark you usually barely get to dive into the story that you already find yourself waiting

Here is the review after reading first five chapters.Writing Quality: 4/5 as there are still few mistakes that needs to be taken care of. However, its understandable and with a few editing, it can get 5/5.Updates: Knowing Swan, you can trust the work ethic and the update stability. A solid 5/5.Story Development: Not much till now, but the 1st chapter and the foreshadowing with all the stuffs happening is something to look forward to.Character Design: I like our MC Alix. He seems closer to realism while still remaining a fictional character. I hope I was clear enough XD.World Background: Not much revealed but I am looking forward to it.And cover! Its OP asf.

The story is really good! I love how Sage always looks after his mom and tries to find a way to save her! I hope she will one day wake up and make him happy! And the game theme is the best too! I love it and would recommend it to everyone!

Damien sensing that Henri wasn't really wholly focused on him, a corner of his face twitched slightly, before he slowly and with uncertiantity waved his hand in front of her face twice.

I could see the heartbreak in Loki's eye who just let go.

"What's that smell?" I ask Vera as we near the cart - or, rather, as I near the cart dragging her with me. She doesn't answer back. What I'd do to hear one of her quips now.

Coach Ariel:Ok go!go!go!

This game is how we met...

He looked at her as if she were asking him the wrong question; as if she was supposed to know. "Have you ever seen a fallen angel before? I am the King of demons and I am your mate," he declared as his lips and the fangs touched her skin and Manila felt her vagina clench in expectation as this stranger drew her blood.