Vain - Reviews

This book was an amazing read! I can wait to read the rest chapters! Go luck! This is so relatable and well written!

This is one of the best Novels I've read on this website and I would love to continue reading if the chapters weren't paywalled.really the only thing that bothers me, is that the fights and enemies are getting more and more unrealistic with anime stuff that wouldn't exist in the real world. I think the story would've been 10x better if the Author stayed with his realistic Martial Arts approach but that's just my personal opinion. but I'm not going to pay money for Novels on qidian.I don't know how the contract looks but maybe change to a website that relies on ad revenue or something.

exact similar with astral pet store only different names and different chapter order you need some diferrences man not just names an arc that astral pet store haven't done or something

its a wonderful story keep up the good work . the characters are amazing. you are doing pretty well as a first timer well done , keep updating am with you till the end

Interesting plot! I like how the overall story blends! The idea is original and well thought out! There are a few grammar and spelling mistakes here and there, but besides that, it's a great story! Keep it up!

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Amazing just amazing. I love this story. I just love the way the characters are made and even the way the white jacks are designed. The sci-fi setting is believable and the story pacing is one of the things I love about the story. There are some grammatical errors but they can be solved.

I have so much fun reading this book, it is so well-explained. Also, the way the author adds humor to the story and the characters' dialog is quite smooth, I can feel their needs and efforts. Btw, the ml's behavior and manner are so kyute!! >< making me root for him all along. He is not the best character but he fights with all his life. Come take my heart baby!! <3

It is written in rich, beautiful English. The description offers full immersion into the plot and provoke deep inner conversations. I am intrigued by every chapter I read and eagerly await the story's development.

Lam snubbed, "Just try to keep up, okay elder." The pebbles beneath crunched into action and before long, Lam vanished from sight leaving a snowy trail behind.

"Great. Thank you for the information, Mary. You can go home earlier in the week."