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Vacation From Reality
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Story took way too long to complete. Also, too many typos, grammatical errors, abduction descriptions too repetitive & vague. Writing needed to be tighter. Dialogue sounds like it was written at a middle school level. Not a book I would recommend in it's current form.
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well i love this....basically like overpowered!!!but not all the time,well atleast he has some trouble to'And i wish this story to be more popular so the demanding of Chapter well be more hehehe????My reviewthis story is interesting...The System is controlling the emotions and thoughts of the MC.... like the system wanted MC to do something fot it....the system wanted the MC to be dependet on it, so it could use him (for my opinion)...but as the MC grow matured and be more Independent the system is being less active....well still i love this, but put the MC to much more difficult Challenge atleast even his overpowered it doesn't mean his undefeatable... even his skills are op it doesn't mean his mind are.... and i say one more time.i love this story.continue the hard work???well release more chapters???and expect me to put all my stones in this..?????and support you but don't drop this story ok...

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