Unwanted To Be His Luna - Reviews

very poor editing , if proof read im sure it would be more successful

very good story line

The premise is good. however the implementation, not so much.  If this book was translated into English, the translation is very, very bad.  Improper word usage, grammar,  punctuation and spelling.  Not just a little bit either. I finally had to give up, which I don't usually do.

love this book, sad because alpha storm had to die but I am happy that Lucy was sent back and survived and I am glad that Kim's uncle changed.

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Good day guys. If you love this book please show appreciate in dropping a coin or two, and if there's any error in any Chapter or some spellings are wrong please do not be upset it's the app I'm using in writing. It's will be taken care of soon, so enjoy. ❤️

Guys am sorry if there might be any mistakes in the writing.It's the app I'm using to write which changes the word I've written already like it detecting some errors but end up changing the words I've written,I'm so sorry.Guys?
Please if you love the story you can show appreciation to drop a coin

Good reading.

A few spelling errors, but all in all I will be coming back to read more! Can’t wait to see what happens when Kim and Jayden 1st meet for real! You can already tell J loves her very much.

So many grammatical errors that I am not even sure what is going on...

I love reading short novels like those..it was a good read...

If you're fine with bl and weird plot, sure why not. But if you're sensitive to *nc*st, better not cause even though they are NOT real brothers, the way the author wrote the story makes it look like the other characters dont mind their love relationship (MC and ML).

TAKE NOTE: only the ML and the mc later after some chapters, know that they are not related, meaning others dont mind if its *nc*st☠️