Unforgivable sin - Reviews

Funny, interesting, smart, intriguing story.subudai11 doing great job translating this stroyupdating stability was goodmc was smart, brave and funny. its really good novel.

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While I have absolutely no idea where this is going, I suggest that readers heed the warning: do read the prologue! Why? Because it's so much fun to read. And the solid worldbuilding just gets better and better to the point where you start to see an almost cinematic quality in the way things are presented - it makes you wonder, what if there was an adaptation? The language hits that sweet spot for me as well. I really hope to see this grow and gain traction.Brb, reading more.

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Though the thought quickly passed with a soft glance at the little girl, who seemed ashen-faced at the prospect of poisoning her young lady. That face was so transparent in what it was thinking that Song Hua couldn't help but release a small and light laugh at it, which sounded oddly like a small 'harumph', making He Bao pause for a little, then twitch dangerously in confusion.

"No, it was not."

Aoi Fern Wallace is a mysterious boy. Ace knew he is real. Yet, when Ace tried to recall him, it is not Aoi's face that Ace see. It is a different face. Ace only can see a smile but that smile somehow becomes something that Ace treasured in his dream. Ace never remembers it when he wakes up but Ace believe in Aoi.

I sighed as  I put the letter away before I heard a scream

"Yes! I meant her"

Nora stood from her meditation and opened her eyes to an unexpected sight. In the air floating around her vicinity, she could see four different colours of particles flying in aimless directions.

"Why? Will they cover my mouth with duct tape?" asked me to Nursman.