Under the Forgotten Tree - Reviews

You get an MC that you don't like and he rejects system and women. The premise is decent, MC is very very very very very boring and side characters annoying and so far 1 / 4 women is decent. If the MC or side characters were interesting enough I would continue, but I fail to find a decent enemy to root for. I see no character I like apart for the secretary, which is ok. I want someone to write a villain fan fic for this where the secretary gets saved and the rest of the cast disappears. PS also the kid and her mom should be saved from a life of boredom.Character design should not be negative because of secretary and the kid and her mom.As some have said the story might get better later but I cant get past reading 70 chapters of this.

Have read/am reading dukes other novels and they are all amazing but even only being 7 chapters in I think this one stands above them all in quality, potential and is quite different from the other ones

Good but too slow. WooooooorrdddcountdndjdjjdjxxjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdkdkddjdjdjjdjddjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjuajauauauauajajajajO

I'm just gonna keep this simple. Dweia, the author, knows what she/he is doing. The other book on here written by her/him, 'A Remnant of The Ancients' hooks you as fast as this one. The end of each chapter has you craving for answers and thirsting for more. The spelling and grammar is flawless, and the character building is superb! Make sure you definitely give this book and the author a chance, I promise you won't miss out!

When a virtual game becomes reality but you’re the only player.I really enjoyed reading this novel and you should too!The synopsis is pretty bad so I’ll explain a little about the story. We follow Sean, a gamer and raid leader. But the game he plays, Miracle, has suddenly turned into reality with himself as the only player left. Everything is real but he still has game abilities like leveling up. But he doesn’t have his possessions and level from the game. That’s the bare minimum you need to know.As for what kind of setting, it’s a sword and magic world. There are kingdoms and empires as well as demonic creatures. The gods exist but mostly in lore... for now? There are magical beasts and species  that don’t exist in reality, like dog-headed guys. They are lizards though.Others might say the novel is slow or has nothing unique, but I see it as a high-quality, polished writing that is very exciting to read even if it’s a bit slow (It didn’t feel slow but you can tell it’s slow). They take their time describing architecture, clothing, and even game UI.I like the MC. He’s not a wimp nor does he do things without a purpose. He’s laid-back when he can afford to but is an authoritative commander that takes no sh*t. He requires absolute trust which doesn’t help when he’s just a young boy in the eyes of others. He also only brags to and teases his companion.His companion (which is a girl of course) is very nice too! She was meh in the beginning since first impressions are sometimes off but then you learn more about her and see her personality better later on. She definitely has a story behind her and is a pretty good fit with the MC.The story has no solid direction for now other than getting stronger. Despite that though, the story is feels pretty linear with some degree of freedom when it should feel kinda vague and ambiguous. That’s a good thing if you couldn’t tell. But there are definitely other goals that they are aiming to accomplish, just that I cannot say because smol spoilers.Just so you know, Sean knows of what happens in the future of the game and has pretty in-depth knowledge of game mechanics and information. Though sometimes those game mechanics don’t follow through since it became reality.The translation is very high-quality but there are very few but noticeable mistakes. Such as DUBUFF instead of DEBUFF. There aren’t many cases of this. I can count them on one hand but they are very easy to notice.All in all, great read and I expect it to be one of the better ones in this batch of trial reads even though this is the first one I’ve read from them.Now it’s time for this man to sleep. It’s 6:45 as of writing this.

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it's just wish fulfilment novel. everything will go according to mc. in simple words it's boring

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