Ulysses - Jeanne d'Arc to Renkin no Kishi - Reviews

Excellent start. Nice characterisarions. Thorougly enjoyed every line of the story. Looking forward for the next part. This story will definitely rock. Good luck.

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Amazing concept with a lot of potentialBut the author dropped and rushed the ending out of nowhere  a bit disappointed but who am I to critique his decision to drop at least he finished his work

The fragment holder is an interesting idea.Hope their would system update in order to expand to other games.Get more skills to support him real life.Also it would interesting adding supernatural to world but that's just my opinion.

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absolute garbage I wanted to like this story hit I can't I had to give up. things just happen without explanation MC gives up power just because, none of it makes sense all it does is frustrates you. to top it all off this ain't even an evolution novel it's really just leveling/powering up but they call that evolution for some reason smh. sub par at best

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I love the story so far can you please make it more lively and entertaining, i hope the main charater will have to reveal his true identity soon but before that let him show his family that he is worth

"What basics?" King curiously asked.

The knot finally eased and Akihito was about to sleep when Asami moved down to take his mate in his mouth. Akihito jolted awake again and groaned. "The night is still young, kitten... we have all the time in the world to sleep later. For now, let me love you."