Ugly Duckling - Reviews

The book is really special to me.

This is another bangaaa... Well this another soft workWriting quality: 5/5: I don't have any reason for this 5/5 because it just what this work worth...Updating stability: 4/5: well still kinda stable... Story development: 5/5: this novel is so intriguing that u won't just wanna stop, from on suspense to the other...Character design: 5/5: well all characters in this work not bad... World background: 5/5: well if earth is not rated 5/5 no fictional word deserve it.... Overall summary: the book leans closer to China hidden cultivators appearing in the secular world, so just read....

The book quite literally broke its rules in the first ten chapters. The main character is suppo to be a slave of an organization and have a collar that detects the items they coll from killing enemies yet when he kills a bunch of bosses and gets a lot of loot the collar detects nothing

there's a third one and I'm ready to read along with the series this time instead of finding it after it's 400 chapters in??????????????????????????

Very funny and ass kicking especially when those old idiots when the trap that set for him turn back against them and can believe that they got play by a little kid

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Didn't manage to read far due to many grammatical errors.     .................................................................................................

i like the story from the beginning because it has a lot of potential to be great. mc is a dumb and a trusting and it is fine for me since other author tend to do it for Character development. It Started go haywire around 30+ Chapter that i was forced to drop it. suddenly killing innocent for no reason getting mad killing them and urging them to suicide. a sudden 180 degree turn around in attitude . i am not hook with the authors explanation since from the beginning he was introduced as a moraly upright person and it will take a lot for him to change like that . it was forced or the author lacked the right way to present to us readers that it does not click to me the right way and it irks me. Well according to his monologue he was told by the draconians that you gain power with contract souls . I cannot remember though it might be i have been skipping the other chapters since i am getting irritated to his stupidity or bored. Still i am putting this to library probably dropping it. reason? I am not quite sure how others see anti hero is but for me anti hero are those who still follow the HERO line but still has like a morality . it is hard to explain and there is a clear line for psychopath, psychotic or cold protagonist which i label them as Evil MC most of the time unless given an outstanding background or story execution.kudos though for very good world development and interesting way explaining the stats.  there are other bad things such us being a little dumb, sudden change of mc attitude like being domineering as if he got mental issue. a little bit trusting and making very bad decisions. according to author this will improve and the product will be a cold hearted, vengeful and selfish protagonist . if that is your cup of tea i highly recommend it to you

Ha!

He looked up at me, forced a smile and said,

"We start the war"

"Juda, watch out" Amanda exclaimed as the yellow Sympto neared them. Juda, who had already been warned by Sabira through their mental link, didnt pay it much attention. There were always people who wanted to fight him because they thought he was weak, but then there would always be someone who could sense others powers with their element.