Truly Precious Shared Universe - Reviews

The story is great and all but it lacks proper world building. The MC is supposed be intelligent according to the author but MC acts like emotionaly unstable idiot. The flow of the story is a bit lacking and the MC some how kills s level creatures even though he himself is low leveled and what heck is it about an s level taxi driver! And the constant exited yelling of the MC gets on your nerve while reading. The overall Idea and concept of the story is great but presentation is lacking

the story was good at first, but the MC don't act like a thousand years old person. i mean you are in a different universe what is the first thing you will do? obviously find more information, but go in a game he know nothing about not even the Basics. someone with thousands years of experience should know how important information is. human are in top of world because of their intelligence and that how they made cultivation possible in this part of the story, should not he know at least that?

I enjoyed the story it has little grammar mistake in some chapter it's enjoyable to read when you want something to kill time and I think it would be better if you change the name when people see it they think mc would ntr people not help them

I rarely give any reviews but for your stories? hell ya**: also a fan of Nasuverse, in fact, i am thinking of writing one myself, don't know how it will turn out, Anyway, great story as always

I absolutely like your idea of making the  MC as a sword. Your way of explanation and storytelling is indeed easy for me to understand it. The grammar in the earlier chapters has some problems, but it seems that the later chapters has good grammar.

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"Sakura-chan, help me get sensei on this stretcher," Nichiren said, bringing a stretcher out of the storage scroll he had unfurled. "Then help me strap him down. We're leaving as fast as we can."

so uhm do I have an alibi? Yes.

"Maidland."

Hana: we have been assigned a new case, based on Mrs Yami, and we all four along with detective Abhijeet and detective George will be working on it.

"That's the way back to the village." Van pointed out.

"Yeah. Your favorite. Sardine sandwiches."