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Everything is 5 stars expect for Consistency and translation quality. I bet if the the Authors knew what this **** head translator was causing his novel he would probally beat the translator.
Really interesting concept and the writing is done well, I dont understand why it doesnt receive as much attention as it should, probably because it still has very little chapter! Keep it up man :)
8.MC will be strongest character regardless of who he faces this usually manifests in canon characters being dramatically weaker than they actually are
"Withdraw immediately! Form a shield wall around the Gate, and no matter what, don't break it!" Their officer shouted, his voice seemlingly sounded like he was in a panic.
chief Brent started to think that Daniel fainting due to the recoil of his rifle was all an a act , like a Chinese idiom he heard ' playing the pig, eating the tiger '. if a soldier was really this good to knock out a professional boxer then there was no reason Chief Brent could see that would make a soldier faint due to the recoil of the gun.
