Toaru Hikuushi e no Yasoukyoku - Reviews

The story is messed up after 900 chapter bcz from start our Host YaYan got system but after 900 somehow the FL Wei JinPing also acquired a system. I mean does the writer plan to have 2 system simultaneously in a story and if so the system of FL should have come way sooner not that far in story it just throw you out of mood to read further and never mention the problems with translation.

Zhou Zhi? Villian? Heh! Just read the story and you'll know.The story is probably about 35% normal historical, slice of life, reincarnation, golden finger novel. 63% the  change of the world, the fusion and spiritual energy, where they can cultivate and be a martial artist . And the 2% was the probably the last 50+ chapters of the main story, the parting and saying eternal goodbye to the FL's parents,master, and to her lover.   Anyways just read this, it's a very good story. If you just want some light hearted novel to read, not something casual, but something with an actual plot and story. Then this is for you.  

if you guys enjoyed orv, definitely check this novel out since it's more of a short read and has veryyy similar themes to orv. to me it felt like a rough draft of orv since you'll see connections between the two novels. but yeah this was an incredible story that gives you a lot to think about (cycles, ego, present>past, revolution, etc.) however i think development within the characters was a bit lackin besides jaehwan, so i personally had an issue getting attached to any of them. but yeah maybe if this novel was longer and fleshed out, it would have the potential to be on par with orv but orv is just a masterpiece.

still ff here