To be your Next, the road to become top Patissier - Reviews

Great story, But I will still recommend The Greayest Of All Time:Tales Of The Floater by Krystal George

Story is okay I guess.The Mc have too many superpower that is unnecessary to the story,this is not a Chinese novel lol.One last thing,for god sakes please choose Saitama or Camden as name not freaking both in the story,its making me mad just why can't you choose one to use.

Surely this is one of my top 10 books. Sadly it was not published here in this platform. idk why people voted for those trash books rather than this gold. if I were to nitpick about something, then I would say the title is cringe and the book cover does not give justice to the plot and story. I even read the mtl for this because it's so good so if any of you knows how to make this book continue, then please support coz you won't be disappointed.

The story isn't anything special, a guy gets a system and gets points to buy stuff that can help make him strong, like I said nothing special and nothing that hasn't been done a hundred times before. The circumstances the mc finds himself in are almost always forced and dont really flow smoothly or seem like a random occurrence at all. The grammar itself isn't bad at all but the dialogue is also forced and choppy. Overall, it's okay but dont expect something special. I'd expect in the later chapter to it basically turning into some basic cn stuff where the author is constantly making the author characters only talk about how amazing and special the mc is and face slapping that happens because of a forced circumstance.

Interesting and I look forward to more. My friend, the author, I hope to see it on the list of the best fantasy novelsdon't drop it in the future please and keep the chapters up ;dd

"That's obviously a lie! You went off to play in the forest just yesterday afternoon!"

We followed him to a big atrium, dozens of people were there.

Nsg

"Come here Ichigo, Silent," Nel called out, her expression unreadable.

He slowly shook his head at me. "Same old Aria. I was just telling you that the stars look amazing, like someone I know."

Today I am finally going to get graduated from my academy now I can be a full-fledged adult and I can join the ESF to get closer to my dream. Whoa, I just went too far for today I just want to confirm that I passed my tests. I could just walk through the town to my academy but I don't want to meet my friends on my way because things could get messier with a graduation party or something I am just not good with socializing. So I am going through the forest then I am going to sneak into the academy and come out silently. Ok, now I am out all I have to do is run towards the forest *huh* I am sensing something really bad I looked down and found Emily the most annoying, cold-hearted girl in my academy. I don't know much about her but I just don't like her because she is a lot like me and I don't like people like me.

"Ciihhht,,, bagaimana bisa aku masih memikirkan hal itu,, belum juga lulus tes beasiswanya, aku saja sudah berada diluar jalur....." Stevy menumpat dengan begitu saja, sehingga orang yang lewat pasti berfikir dia sedang ber bicara dengan seseorang, tapi? Buktinya dia sendirian!!