Through Unknowns - Reviews

Alpha Simpson must be up to something when he barged into Beta's house. I will find out.

The authors themselves are in shock that this novel was picked... they are waiting for a few months for someone to tell them that this was a mistake..

An interesting direction for a virtual world novel, has good consistency between short time skips and understanding the projects that happened during them. along with a young man discovering his interests in engineering and having the freedom to move on his own.

Another 4chaoter novel... Seriously, did you guys discuss with each other before agreeing to post only four chapter? Come on.... I can't give a good review apart from it give me the feel of "I thought the world is weak, but suddenly plot smack me in the face"...

The best so far. It goes into details. HIGHLY RECOMMEND YOU TO TRY . Subscribe to my youtube channel for more,..Follow on instagram @i.am_number_4.

I can't say much here, but if you read the sypnosis, you should know about the story, it might not be as exciting as you thought of it and I apologize for that, I truly lack of experienceAnyway, enjoy my novel!

This is a review of the first four chapters.  In this story, the main character takes a detour on the way home from school and ends up in a supernatural world.  He then desperately tries to escape from this supernatural world, but he keeps being pulled back. The plot is scary, but the numerous run-on sentences and other grammatical mistakes dull the shock.

Nice narrative and the story is flowing and very cc captivating

She stared at the command seals one last time on her hand. Everything was surreal. She didn't know what exactly Shirou had gone through, but she was willing to stand by his side. After all, he is family, isn't he?

His reflexed were incredible; his partner was unable to lay so much as a finger on him. Red-faced, Yijun's opponent rounded his weapon, towards Yijun who lifted his arm, thrusting it to the side without a sign of struggle. The other student stumbled, his ankle giving way and landed on the mat. Yet, that did little to stop him from scrambling to his feet, all the while resting the majority of his weight on one foot.

"Ok."

With coordination, the wolves all pounced at me at the same time! Focusing the moonlight's strength and Qi to my legs, I swept the ground in a circular manner with strength weaker than my earlier blow.