Thrall - Reviews

It was good at first, but then it fell apart. Plot holes are a dime a dozen. I drop this. Without kara will be good fanfiction. And what about madara…. it was bad

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I am not really good at writing reviews but well I want to write a review for this book. I do enjoy reading the book and I feel that this book is well... good to read? like i said I am not too good at this but I would like the author to know that I like this book and wish that there would be more updates and longer chapters cause they kind feel a tad short.

Too good...this book is just so good.                                                                                                                     

I just really hate that all of theese evolution novels have the main characters become pussies. This book had some really good potential but it ruined it like all the other cliché and ****ty books

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

oh i don't no if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss  on how to improve your book performance, publications, profitability

Story has a great start but from academy ark it became really boring, mc just a side character, he has less screen time from either one of his friends and enemies, i'm currently at chapter 206 and i can't read it further.From what i see he would be a side character, or one of many mc in his own slice of life story. Why i think so? because he wants to travel with his friends in the future.So if you like story with several mc's, you would like this story, if not it would be boring and a waste of time.It has a great start though, i really liked it.

"You heard me. The guy you were with, he seemed awfully comfortable with you."

"Did you pick her up?"

Upnext we both locked that robbers in a single room.

"Hell's Purge!" Kyou cast a high tier debuff skill on herself and quickly gaining control of her visions. Then Kyou felt a chill running through his back.