Lots of repetitive sentences in each chapters, note to author - you don’t have to keep reminding the readers of the same thing 3-4 times in the same chapter. I stopped reading coz it was a waste!
His master appeared nearby and Albusflores wanted to express how wrong he had been, but all that came out was a sobbing 'sowwy' and his arms failed to reach as his master sidestepped him. Albusflores faceplanted some moss instead.
