Part of a review swap, and at time of reading, there are 14 chapters.To be brutally honest, this genre is not my cup of tea. The word "suicide" itself turns me off, as I don't like anything remotely dark. Violence, is fine strangely enough.Anyway! On with the review.Writing Quality: English isn't my first language, so any minor grammatical erros wouldn't be seen by me. However, I would suggest Author to :(i) Ensure proper capitalisation of words(ii) Have more paragraphs, especially when it's a dialogue. Would make the reading smoother. When a paragraph is too big, those who read using an app would find the huge chunk of text off-puttingStability of Updates: 5* in good faithStory Development: It's certainly a good start and is developing well. You can see how the death of the sister was the catalyst to him turning out / becoming better. It's a unique perspective for me (can't say if this is new, or fresh as I don't normally read this genre). Character Design/World Background: So far, so good. The pace is there, the development is well.All the best Author. :)
