The trainer. - Reviews

The story has its faults, but there is a noticeable growth for the author, so I expect this to change into a good story at some point. Author does sadly need an editor to help him or her out with the whole process, as there are mistakes and repetitiveness in the chapters.

"Mister Frank, won't this fireball exploding burn the cave completely and us together with it?"

Just that, what humans didn't know was, this discrimination all started when those who seated in the throne and those who serve him, was greedy for power.

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"No wonder the necklace was very familiar, grandfather had kept a picture of his early projects in an old photo album and he had told me a story about it a few times."

"And if I love what will she do?"

"Haha.  Soon the karma will be on his way" The wings of vengeance said to her.  She looked at her and she knew that woman.  

"What did I say about using my first name!" Gibby shouted but Felix had already left the office. "That boy will kill me with just his presence."

"I'm tired of all your whining and bitching. Lately that's all I've been hearing and I'm so fucking sick of it! So, this is what we are going to do. All of us heading to the dance floor to dance our asses off all fucking night long. Got it?"

There was no such thing as free lunch.

"What...what do you want as the return?"

Teiga: What!?