The legend of kai uchiha - Reviews

Ill give 5/5 since its a kingdom builder. Now for the actual review ....First off even though ima complain mostly its because its good enough to complain about and I like the story. Anyways my biggest issue with the story is the pacing and YES I know the first 200 or so chapters is set-up so I wont mention them. But after Volume 1 its supposed to pick up, and maybe it does a little bit but the writing style makes it seem like it doesn't. ---Basically as a reader who is caught up, I have to wait 1 day for 1 chapter, and that isn't bad as that release rate is quite good. But the content in those chapters are not worth the day wait, so instead you feel disappointed when you look and buy a chapter that is about cutting hair ... thats it that was the ENTIRE chapter! In a kingdom builder that can easily span 1000s of chapters these small things like getting a haircut or finding bones of a dino should be small parts of the overall chapter. ----- What I'm saying is if I stopped reading for a year and came back I wouldn't have a problem because I could skip those chapters or read them and not feel scammed by it because there are hundreds of chapters to binge read. But that isn't the case, Instead I look forward to a chapter to release and it turns out to be a character who doesn't matter getting their haircut and their feelings about it.----- Anyways your book do what you want ill probably still read it even if I feel disappointed because  kingdom builders that are readable are RARE.

After a very long time, something worth reading has been translated and translated well. Sincerely appreciable effort by the author who has beautifully focused on characters and story instead of power-up. Hope this gets selected and the story continues to amaze me. Well done author. Well done translator.Keep it up.

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Absorbing story! It's filled with a lot of captivating factors. The narration is good. I liked the writing flow very much. Although it's not my favourite genre the story kept me interested! It's undoubtedly a good read for me.

I want to point out Author's biggest pros and cons as someone who is a big fan of author's previous 2 works. And what you can expect from this novel as well. Pro: 1.)Author NAILS the power-systems especially in Sword God, it's unironically atleast top 3 among power-systems in general. So you can expect this novel to have a great power-system as well. 2.)The training arcs are the best parts of Author's novel. They go into detail in the mechanics, with baby-steps as well as trail and errors. You feel a personal connection to the power/technique MC obtains since you saw the entire struggle of how MC obtains it and it makes all the more satisfying when MC uses them. 3.) I have never seen author write a 2D-bland character even if it's a one time occurring side character. They actually act as competent beings and possess dynamic personality. Cons: 1) Biggest Con of author is he does not treat the side characters well. Author would write a character with so much potential only to be never mentioned again. Biggest slap in the face is when these side characters die off screen and we know they are dead because so much time has passed that there lifespans are already over. This happened over and over again in Lightning is the only way, same goes for Sword god I am still mad one of my favorite character just died without ever being mentioned(I don't want to directly mention name since it's spoiler so I will just in a cryptic way say: ? ? ) There are some other smaller cons but for the most part Author is GOAT! So I can personally expect "Kill the Sun" to be my new favorite of all times.

Nope, Ngl I may have posted this way to early but the beggining so far has me not liking this book already, it seems you made the Mc extremely non intelligent, it ruined it for me, though other people might enjoy this story, not me though

I hug him tightly. I started to cry. "Please make sure he doesn't get me"

So, the answer was teamwork… Shouto mused. He had been home-schooled until now, so he was still clueless about what teachers wanted to see in their students. The only thing his father ever wanted was perfection and strength, so it had clouded his thinking slightly. Shouto instantly adjusted his mentality, taking the little lesson that Midoriya had given him with grace.

Will you finish this novel or do you have other?

"Y-you killed him... My SON! YOU KILLED HIM!" Lord Phenex bellows in rage. His wife seeing this tries to appease him and calm him down as she 'dreaded' what were to happen next, but to no avail.

Mamat fell silent then the Writerz immediately broke Mamat's silence.

In conclusion, this novel would do wonders if it had a beta reader and a qualified editor. The protagonist's personality is horrible, not because he is a villain, but because it is so poorly written and planned that it simply makes him awful. There are many VERY visible plot holes in this story that the author ignores. The characters don't feel realistic and the Mc says so much unnecessary or cringe-inducing dialogue that I just want to kick him. (rewritten review)