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The demon of the past
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This book is terrible and amazing. It makes me want to read more, and I can't stop. The problem is that at chapter 89+, everything is locked, and I can't continually read. I can only unlock 2, maybe 3, every day. This is killing me. Is there a way for me to catch up and then use fast pass. My friends got hooked on this, too.
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I'm surprised by how meaningful this novel is, it changed my life. I showed this to my family and it changed their lives, too.  They continued to show this novel to neighbours and their lives changed,too. Now we all worship Lin Fan, the god of cringe.
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Shameless Author here, with a shameless review.I wrote this novel some years ago, and it is complete. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there are some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud over it and enjoyed it thoroughly. This story is about following your dreams and being true to yourself. I hope you will give it a try and enjoy it. It is after all, complete.I am currently writing quite a few novels, and amongst them is the complete series Overthrowing Fate (Also on this site and completely updated), Condemning the Heavens (Also on this site, ongoing) and a few romance novels, amongst these one romance novel called Forsaken Immortals (Also on this site, ongoing), which is a cultivation romance novel. If you like my writing, please give it a try!
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The story is well written and well paced with occasional extremely evocative imagery. Despite the cover and what the title implies, there is no R-18 content so far as I've read.
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Hi guys editors translators and webnovel! i will write 2 part of review of this novel and 3 others: in this part i most say that the title of the novel is all wrong: "Creating Artifact Spirits To Be My Wives: Am I A Blacksmith?"is not correct. he may be a kind of a Blacksmith, but they are not his Wives, they are more as companions, that want to protect him and maybe feel affection to him because he created them all, maybe a herm can work a bit here, and i have this strong feeling that he will also fight alone or together with them himself and not use their protection at the beginning. their protection is only in the beginning, later on he will kill himself and get stronger himself, the novel is one of the best in the past few months, and give us surprises again and again, and Xiao Shui will be his first antagonist, and later on we will see more powerful antagonists,Now
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can't wait...................***************************.************************...................***************************.***********************...................***************************.***********************
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I just finished reading what was of the 21 chapters then read destiny forged and I LOVED both of them. I NEED MORE AHH...........................................................
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-Pretty much perfect grammar-interesting mc / premise (a complete villain is nice) -powers are definitely fun...time stop is really cool keep going
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THIS IS AN ACTUAL REVIEW WITH DETAILS AND SUMMARY. READ IT. PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS WAS WRITTEN FOR THE NEW RELEASE NOVEL AND THEREFORE IS ONLY UP TO DATE ON THE MOST RECENT CHAPTER (14).Tags: Male Lead; Magic; ?Age Rating: 12+ - No strong language thus far in the first 14 chapters, but violence is likely to occur and there has been some slight horror themes.Summary: A man calling himself Jon is transported to a different world, carrying with him only a plant and the object used to transport himself there- the Alien Eye. The noble Padt Family saves him from his near-death state and takes him in, offering him a job as a fruit grower. This is not his story. Twenty years later, Viscount Noah Padt, the man who originally took in Jon is dead, and his eldest son Leon Padt stands to inherit. Angor Padt, the younger son, has been mentored by Jon, and learned of a strange place called "Earth." However, Jon, at a mere fifty-some years of age, is withering away. He tells Angor that "Gaia's Will," or the will of this world, is rejecting him for not being originally from there. When Count Eton comes through, seeking the "Morning Dew," or a tea made from the plant Jon had brought with him, a wizard is accompanying him. Wizards are the stuff of myths and legends, but this one reveals himself for the Morning Dew. After it helps him achieve a breakthrough, he offers the Padts one favor. Though Angor first tries to save Jon, the wizard fails. Instead, Angor asks for the oppurtunity to become a wizard. During his testing, it is revealed that Angor does indeed have the necessary talent.Translation Quality: 5/5: There are no obvious grammar or spelling errors, and everything seems fine.Stability of Updates: 4/5: Hard to judge. I'm giving it a 4/5 since we can't tell this early on in the translation.Story Development: 5/5: Already interesting and unique. Instead of centering around the transmigrator (Jon), it instead follows someone else who is trying to save him. A refreshing change from the multitude of reincarnation/transmigration/time travel stories on Webnovel. Additionally, the story seems to be avoiding most the extremely obvious cliches, such as a family drama over the line of succession (that we see in almost EVERY female lead novel and quite a few of the male lead novels here). In fact, this line is stated by two servants talking about the line of succession since Leon will inherit everything: "Those family conflicts you read about in the drama novels won't happen here."Character Design: 5/5: Characters are unique and have their own personalities. Also, people can CHANGE THEIR MINDS. Wow. Mindblowing! The wizard, who originally planned to burn down Padt Manor in search of the Morning Dew, changes his mind and later offers them a favor when they give it to him out of their own goodwill.World Background: 2/5: As soon as the wizard comes, we discover there's a whole other larger world out there. ...this is honestly so overused. Main character coming from a tiny backwater? Discovers powers? It's extremely cliche, and I expected better.Overall: A nice change of pace from most of the cultivation novels here. I will note that it does seem to have some cultivation aspects, with breakthroughs and ranks for the wizards. I will continue reading this!Please like this if you want to see more actual review and not just "Guuuuuuuddd" or "Ugh terrible" in the review sections! Also note that this is an early review supposed to give people an IDEA of what the story is like, and that there are only 14 chapters out!
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so far the story is quite interesting the mc has a different way of upgrading his card the rest and it looks that even though he wants to be alone the fml would not let him be alone
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". Help!" it was the voice, it was calling for help. They all got startled first.
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Some time passes and Jake is woke up by screaming coming from out side Jake grabs wind cutter and air piercer and runs out side and sees that the village is being attacked by crows with there wings on there back and arms and legs having Talons "find the dagger of entry" screamed one of the crows at that moment Jake knows it is the dagger he had received from the Chief Jake began to move towards the crow who was not moving ready to tack out the dagger Jake jumps unsheathing the dagger and slash at the crow.

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