The curse of eternity - Reviews

Very rarely I rate a book so high no need for trail read sign me up I’ll read as many chapters this book releases looks good sounds good flows good

Great book, it’s amazing, still liked when it was free but hey I’m happy your getting recognition.

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Ok I’ve got to admit that I’m a fan!!! I’ve tried reading a few gaming novels on WN, but yours is the first one I could seriously read. Your writing style is wonderful, and there weren’t any errors that I could pick up on. The dialogue also felt natural, and with the way you crafted Hao, it’s easy to see who he is and understand where he’s coming from. Great work!!!

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Looking forward to it. Amazing story. Creative writing. Keep up the good work. Can I post a review in another language other than English? ? love it ?

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The story is truly touching and quite relatable, being awaken from a fake utopia is my type of plot after all. Although I've seen lots of stories of this theme, this one's unique in its own way. The characters are portrayed to be realistic, as well as their actions but reading it is very entertaining.So, the writing quality is well and decent but I believe there are still room for improvement (purely from a reader's pov, I'm not a professional writer either). I suggest you add more descriptions to the dialogues or describe the current scenario in a more detailed manner, to aid with the reader's visualization. There were some grammatical errors but that's totally fine and does not get in the way of understanding the story (I myself commit that most of the time lmao but too lazy to check them), proof reading is the key, YAS. All in all, the slice of life genre was given justice to and that's a big thumbs up! The story development is good and I am looking forward to how it will progress further. Keep it up!

Kon'nichiwa I can't and refuse to be ashamed of my book. ?Although my writing style or portrayal of the world might be a bit strange to you all. Grammar is well umm...well...Reasonable constructive criticism and not straight out dissing is welcome ??u200d♀️This is my first system novel and I don't know how suiting it is to you readers ?hence my ratings. From the first arc(volume) the character takes a trip to an alternate world and how he developed his antihero character. ~Although I don't know if the reason for him taking this course seems plausible to you all ?Starting from the next arc(volume) deals with him infiltrating an organisation which had a big play in what he had become.The remaining arc should be determined by you readers ?. You could drop your interpretation of the arc once the chapters for it are up.There are subtle references to anime scenes or character as my character does love anime [*cough *cough so do I], so you could drop them here if you spotted them.Any questions you have on the book could be asked here! I'd try to answer to the best of my ability while keeping it vague if you are asking for spoilers.Arigatōgozaimasu

"Master I need to fight so I can increase my rank, S class is not my best, due to having been confined for so long a lot of my power is gone"

The genre is Magic realism if you're wondering. I hope you enjoy this book as well