The city of Crimes - Reviews

This story blew me away. The world building is amazing, Jack is such an enthralling character, and even the side characters are well developed. The power system is unique and this entire story is so good that I am desperately hoping that the author keeps writing, and it gets the attention it deserves.

Am I the only one here still occasionally visiting this page hoping for a new chapter ??This novel has a unique air about it that I won't be able to find in other novels. Translator-san, please continue this work, cause I will wait for it. ?

My first try reading Web novel, and the writer is so good at portraying scenes about cultivation etc.. As it is his first try I would like to compliment him by saying "nailed it ??"   keep updating on your  novel, As fans we will be eagerly waiting for it ❤️❤️.

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Mary sue of a character, author say's she can do martial art's but can't even defend herself from one bastard. Ml always being the knight in shing armor which would be fine if it didn't happen every time and she just freezes like a deer in headlights. And mind, you, we are going to be up against dangerous criminals and terrorist in this novel. You're just better off reading a chinese novel.

"Well... it is said that the seals are always sufficiently strong to subdue our evil. No matter what. And that those cultivation levels are attainable just by those real geniuses or the Dual cultivators. You have probably already guessed that I have never seen anyone who has a level of cultivation superior to the "fundamental level". I also heard legends saying that in order to make a breakthrough you generally need a strong understanding of the "spiritual energy" that resides this world and that you might even need special items extremely precious! Haaa I'll probably not see one true cultivator in my lifetime. This is my only regret ..."

Hahaha??????...Ternyata hanya Mimpi?????Padahal tapi sempat ikutan baperr???????

"Well, it's absolutely fun." Naruto said with a smirk "I got to fuck all the hot women in the world and knock them up if I want to. As you already know, I can live for thousands of years. Sex is fun but sitting in the same place and wait for a pussy to come to you is absolutely boring so I decided to go on a journey like my father, but to the land he had never been before, like this land Selenus. I want to introduce myself to every single one multi-verse and fulfill the purpose of what a man was born to, spread my love and repopulate the population in the normal way." And he grabbed Grayfia's head and pulled her back, putting his cock back to the underneath of the table and gave it to the cock-hungry whores hiding underneath. Grayfia stood up and fixed her clothes before finding Naruto's hand made it way to her pussy and thrust four fingers into her fold.

//Heart-Beat protocol has been deemed complete with room for improvement//

"Shridevi is awake and the sun is near setting! It's time!"

"Damn! A real life transmigration happened! No wonder I was sent here when my Host was dead, she was in the process of being transmigrated! Freaking awesome! Why does her family not look like they care that she is alive again, though? Some weird ass family problems, huh. Good luck, my Host! Hehe."

yoo!!!....nice story,wrote a review to remind u to update ?