the story was good till now until the MC takes responsibility of a child in chapter 290, it seems like the MC is a priest rather than a king, and he is only 15 years old, so what's the need to make him a Dad this early without even a partner at that. I thinking of dropping it now. I really liked the character creation and world. Still it could have been better...
I don’t think I ever written a review for all the novel that I have read. Commented on them, gave my criticism, but never a review. The reviews here don’t do this novel any justice. This is one of the worst novels I have ever read. Sometimes some MC are ridiclously overpowered but this MC, it’s just plot armor. The background for this story, horrendous. The description - terrible. The characters of Earth - idiots. There are some novels where the background story is made pretty late and things will somehow make sense but this one is just ridicolous and just lazy writing. The only good thing is the grammar is actually ok. That’s it. Don’t waste your time with this novel. Author’s summary was ok but this book is just dumb.
Extremely - EXTREMELY - difficult to read! It took immense effort just to decipher the sentences. I had hoped the story would improve over time, but it unfortunately didn't. The first chapter was hideous, the second showed improvement, but then after the third, quality dipped to all-time-low again.Let's forget about writing quality for a moment and address the elephant in the room: story development and character design. The protagonist so far has 0 (yes zero!) personality. We don't know anything about him apart from the one tiny little detail that he's a transmigrator from our Earth. You would think after this abysmal display of character design things can't possibly get any worse! But no! Somehow it does.The protagonist in a display of absolute genius decides to reform the government to not only have a constitution, but a constitution which directly limits the Emperor's (the MCs) power. Transforming the absolute monarchy into, you guessed it, a constitutional monarchy. This author is clearly either completely ignorant about historical social evolution, or worse...a liberal snowflake.
Very impressive beginning! What a perfect skill to bring the thrill to the audience. The character was well built, but the world building was restricted due to the nature of realistic novel. A great novel for who like novel with mystery element
Lazy writing with countless mistakes. Obvious that English isn't the author's first language. Information/exposition dumped unskilfully from the onset of the story instead of lightly sprinkled throughout the beginning of the story ruining any chance of blooming a sense of intrigue. Horrible naming sense such as the beast continent named Bestia etc. Extremely clichéd, archetypal characters, where the pretty girl takes interest on the MC for nothing worth mentioning. Guns is a magical world as marginal originality in an otherwise completely original story base. Also the character descriptions are very thorough but bland. MC doesn't start as overpowered but it's painfully obvious that he will be soon so say goodbye to any tension that could have been bred.
After some time, Ren heard a steady breathing sound coming from Tsubaki. He carefully laid her on the bed. His phone vibrated the moment he covered her with a blanket. It was Akashi. Ren stepped inside the bathroom before taking the call.
''Gentlemen, I have bad news...'' Says Fury greeting the heroes. ''... Ultron has taken possession of Dr. Cho and her technology. I reckon that together with the Vibranium from Claw he has already made himself an indestructible body.''
