Translation issues aside (yuan dollars, jin kilograms), this novel is plain boring.Writing quality: the novel is plagued with inconsistency: shark smell blood but then abandons pursuit when it lost sight of MC. It is also very hard to read due to translation of currencies issues leading to fishes costing millions of dollars ... Story Development: the only thing to look forward to is MC getting stronger, there is no plot, no foreshadowing, we don't know how different the world is.Character Design: There is only MC and MC has no design. Oh and every one is a millionnaire but MC is both a millionaire and poor.Updating: not an issue given I'm dropping this in less than 10 chaptersWorld background: I think the author doesn't know either
Fairly good. Might be shaping into a harem but I'll have to wait and see. There are some cliche bits but not too bad. The MC seems to have more depth to them than typical WebNovel standards.All in all I think this is worth a read to see if it fits your tastes. I'm planning to add it to my collection and will only drop it if it turns for the worse.
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"Is your sister magic?" Annabeth can't help but ask, her eyes greedily taking in the structure her blueprints she, along with her siblings, planned and designed. The two buildings are placed outside the U-shaped formation, but it's spacious and aesthetically pleasing to the eyes.
"Collin! What happened, Is something urgent? Are you alright!" Austin steadied the young man with gentleness and his eyes were filled with concerns. Collins was fully ragged and the smell of the saltwater from the ocean stuck Austin's nostrils when he drew close to the young man. Austin's eyebrows arched when he studied him, 'Did something terrible occurred when I am not here!'
"Humph, he may be at the peak of the 2nd stage but his skills are way below average. Unlike his opponent who has a clear grasp of his strength and his opponent's weakness. This is what happens when one only has false strength and not enough skills."
Add evil Mc tag, cuz the mc is evil af.The story is great, give it a read. Highly recommended for fantasy lovers.Don't add any harem or romance, please.
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
