The Wayward Bard - Reviews

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Great start up untill you hit Chapter 98 and then it becomes broken and unreadable, like the author left out a bunch of stuff between chapters

Ive read the first few chapters, and the story is great, but i fell like i know too much ybout the lore of LOL to enjoy this novel, especially bringing in a girl called Misha, is like inviting trouble, especially when Aatrox or Zoe ever apear in that story, or the thing with Shyvanna, i understand that the story changes a few things, but turning a half dragon in a beautiful lady seems kinda off, especially regarding the amount of realism Yummi, Rek'sai and Garen got. And its already kinda setting bad flags incase Lux should ever become part of the story

Ahh this is so cute is Keit the ML? Thats great then she will have a happy ending.  p.s first one to comment yay

Suddenly another axe hit his little boat, breaking one of the outriggers and cracking the main hull. Water started flowing in but Alfy paddled with all his might. Snot and tears ran down his face as the poor little guy gave 110%.

Sale's lady: hoy huwag mong hawakan yan tingnan mo nga napakadumi ng iyong kamay!umalis kayo dito baka wala ng pumasok na costumer dito!

"Fel Mother, i want to tell you something about ceremony"

tHe bath her, dressed her up, comb her hair and of course spoil her like a child. He even carried her downstairs to the chopper that he bought for her as her birthday gift. For them to spend less time in travelling, she suggest the chopper so they could make love when they get there.

Katrina's point of view.

"Ridley…. Did it go well, cutie?" Fiera winked at Ridley before leaning for a hug… As for the beautiful girl behind Feira, Ridley smiled at her as she blushed and nearly fell over….

bakugo: 67 meters

I got up and put my clothes back on. I went downstairs and took my bag and was on my way to the entrance,when suddenly I felt a hand on my shoulder and saw jimin.