The War for your Land (Book #1) - Reviews

The War for your Land (Book #1)
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An interesting read indeed albeit very few grammatical errors here and there, the story and plot makes up for it.As the story begins you get and idea of the world and the background, especially with the tower at the center.I also love the personalities of the characters as they feel genuine the more you read their interactions. Good writing  good plot, excellent story.
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When you first start reading it , the story looks as if it will go the same route as the cliche sign in novels. But surprisingly, it doesn't.MC doesn't get OP at the start of the novel and there is no time skip of him doing the same thing everyday for 10 or 100 years. MC has the cheat of getting reward for doing his job i.e. Appraisal of treasures at a pawnshop. But to not make this too overpowered, the author has put the restriction of baleful aura, if the MC tries to appraise a treasure that is out of his league or has a powerful ghost attached to it, he'll die. In other sign-in or job-reward novels, the MC try to act super low-key and are trash in other people's eyes and hide themselves before doing anything with their power. But here the MC shows his power just enough to be labelled as a genius and get access to appraise more treasures. Smart move if I say so.The world-building is great too, even though the MC doesn't go outside that often, his cheat allows him to see the history of the treasure that comes to the shop to be appraised and he is somehow involved in it.If one notices carefully, the origin of his power being suspicious can also be seen, hints such as him thinking of the pill even though he can't afford it and wondering why is he doing that, when he says he doesn't understand alchemy, a reward is given so that he gets the basics, this isn't plot armor as we read it carefully.He doesn't passively get beaten up or let someone take his life. Active and not overly dependant on his cheat. A really good novel so far.
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Hypnosis stories are always welcome here. I hope that you will keep on writing chapters. Mind control is very rare in here so I am very delighted to see a novel like this.
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Knee jerk review as of chapter 10. I'm all about the beginning few chapters of being high importance as that's what makes me keep reading. So spoilers are here but only up to chap 10.It's so far The Rising of the Shield Hero but edgier. Generic MC and backstory, the classic bullied by everyone, he's useless, powerless, etc, then gets crazy powers, and a system to boot. The writing can be repetitive and at times is so choppy it becomes tedious to read. World building is glossed over more or less as he "studied in the library" and knows most everything of importance.  Level scaling, explanation of magic, just a general sense of what is "strong" to be able to compare to isn't their either in my opinion. He also levels up insanely quickly as it seems killing single wolves while he's way above their level still garners him a fair amount of exp. Which is also never mentioned or shown, he just levels up instead. So the sense of progression isn't there and it begs the question why not just cheese it and power level off of weak beings. Why even need a slave? He says he needs a meat Shield but he seems to be doing fine on his own. Even going out gaining like 3 levels with ease just after he gets the slave and this is while  it's recovering. Overall it's pretty middle of the road, not really doing anything new or interesting. I may pick it up time to time to see if it gets better or maybe skip a few chapters ahead and deal with the lost information. Like I said the beginning is the most important to me as it sets all my expectations for the whole book and right now I'm just kinda "eh" ?u200d♂️ Also I have no idea about updating stability, so freebie 5 stars lol.
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'oi oi shouldnt you be more worried? what if I grow a pair ears and a tail?!?!' I reply with irritation
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"Good luck, I heard he's very scary, it's said he never lets anyone see him." She went down to a whisper. "I heard if they do see him, he kills them!" She shivered.
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Liu Yang, sweating rivers, could only try to speak, but somehow, could not utter even a sound.
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"Well it did appear when I was born. But what I don't understand is why it's completing with eighteen years. And no, I do not sense my death approaching, but I keep on seeing this face..."
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Interesting, a little short but as it is a starter I won’t say much. Vague description neither too short or long. I’d like to see where this kid goes as it seems he will have an interesting fate!.Good one and keep going. I’d be thrilled to read more!

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