The Unlikely Avenger - Reviews

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Author here. I am here shamelessly to give my own work with 5* :) and explain a bit about the story.Our Mc is sealed for an unknown time, but when he woke up and broke the seal, he realized he was in a foreign land. Later, slowly but surely, our Mc will find out how he end up in this foreign land (Earth). He will slowly uncover the mysteries Earth experienced such as the catastrophe 600 years ago and so on. Please be patient with the slow start :)I hope you enjoy my second work or maybe third? Nevermind, hope you enjoy my story :)

While I am a bit tired of the MMORPG theme at times, I can't stop reading this genre.   And this one, in particular, turned out to be a very good read, I liked the characters and the development of the story. It has good potential waiting for how it evolves and more updates.

Obviously wish that the chapters coming out would be longer and have more in them, but overall it's a pretty good story so far. keep it going

It's a decent system book, and I like the ML. However, sometimes the writing style can be a little off, but for the most part it's good.I'm curious to see where this goes.

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Axe hero  = I was walking and I got hit a car too.

And clung herself to Song Sungjae's and putting her arm into Song Sungjae's arm, She got away. Kang Taeyeon also joined in. Kim Sara said the competition will be announced in few minutes so they were all waiting.

"hmmm, mas aku kedinginan mas, peluk aku mas"

"Then you will suffer the punishment you would have received. This is an example of what will happen to you if you don't agree to my deal." he snapped his fingers, and then he summoned more chains from down below, which dragged Alex even deeper to hell.

As the day passes on an young boy comes to the hill. he sits down, leaning against me. I suddenly remember something that oldie said, '... you will be a willow tree' or something like that. I'm a goddamn tree. I look down at the boy, he looks about ten and he looks pretty upset. I feel pretty bad for him, maybe I should try to help him. I try to reach down to him, "Hey," a voice calls," what are you doing up here? Are you okay? Are you crying?" The boy looks up, I get a good look at his face now, he has pale blue eyes and his chestnut hair covers half of his face. his lips are a pale pink but right down both sides are trails of blood.