The Twin Alpha's Mate (Book 1 -Azure Moon Series) - Reviews

Don't take this novel seriously. If you're looking for some action-packed masterpiece then this is not it. It's just a light-hearted, fun and all around calming read. It's not the worst, and compared to many novels picked up in the Trial read it's actually pretty good. A lot of people here don't understand that. Anyway, yeah, check it out if you want to turn off your mind and just settle in for a smooth reading experience. My opinion might change though, we only have 20 chapters here so far, after all.

Its a story I would recommend, but not strongly. It has potential and will certainly be well recieved by the LitRPG groups but its pretty basic. Sure I haven't read anything identical and its an intriguing idea but it isn't fast enough to make one hooked. I read the 15 chapters and I loved it but when the updates are like they are(1 chapter everyday or two) its simply hard to hold the same interest as a large chapter everyday. I'm not saying that its a bad pace especially since I have experience writing and I know how hard it is to keep writing while life is going on.The character developement is a tad bland but this isnt a professional book. It seems like the MC was adapting way to quickly and accepting a crazy thing like it was an everyday occurrence. He acted vicious in one chapter to someone who did something nonsensical to the MC but it wasn't that made sense. The world is made to be similar to the real world and even recently(chapter 22 for me) included a real event with some large company but it seemed  slightly exaggerated. Not that it is negative to point out. Overall I hope it gets more popular and gets some better pointers and the Author improves the story. Good Luck! I'll be in the shadows lurking like always!

shame its harem, i was interested.                                                                                                         .

The story is very good. Well the most I like about is the elements of tag "Depiction of cruelty". A man driven to the extreme by the gods just because he refuses to give the gods access to something he and his friend built. Now that he has gotten half control over the tower that they built he will do everything in his power to get revenge against the gods and devils.

Veer smiled and said while looking toward the horizon "This is the mortal world which is used by nature to recycle and reproduce the spiritual energy and soul strength through the mortals. We are the blessed ones to be born in the mortal world and are allowed by nature to pursue the path of spirituality by being in the mortal world and interacting with mortals directly. Even Suras and Asuras may feel jealous of Yogis of the mortal world."

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Afterwards, I leaved Belit to tend to my "beloved mistress". The priestess was already better because she started casting healings spells on herself as soon as the battle was over but Tarnorie still had to cure the wounded wizard.

"But, you accept it. And you are the first to hit me, you know."

''Someday I will Become a Great Witch like you and in all of Funtazia Mom!'' Samantha said loudly with much confidence.

"Whoah, then why is she contracted to a fucking brick. I'd cancel that summon"

I wish to, but Now I'm free

"Give me another potions, Jester."