The Thunder Demon Straw Hat Luffy - Reviews

I like it so far and that system seems like an interesting "character". lowkey wanna see how this is gonna go. I'll be waiting for more updates author.

Literally the same as the author's other novel but with some small changes.  Also very predictable (cliché), the secondary characters have no common sense (reasoning), another in which the protagonist cannot be called a villain just because he says so in the novel.  The end of the novel does not bring anything new that another does not see, you no longer have this type, if you have not read the author's other novel you can remember to read.

Great story but author need to edit and improve grammer. Need more chaptersneed more chaptersneed more chaptersneed more chaptersneed more chapters

i will give 5 star to show support to my fellow dao members on fb group.

Okay, first of all, almost all of the conflict so far has come from an unreasonable young master type, who has minimal justification for going after the MC. Second, it makes no sense that his [spectacle lord] was classified as [F-ranked]. Lol, what?All things considered, kinda bad.

Also, during this time, Ochieng' became a very good friend of Akinyi Nyalando. They had shared many insights and his knowledge about his roles had improved greatly. He came to have  a good understanding of the Saints.

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The moment Aki took a strange soul construct in form of a knife, the demon controlling the old man's body felt fear.

"Kau cemburu padanya?" masih dengan senyuman diwajahnya.

Pelempar regenerasi (level 1) (aktif)

Percy threw a slice that brought me back into battle, but as I blocked, the group of Ares kids(Annabeth told me) from earlier appeared out of the forest. "Why aren't you getting the flag?" Me and Percy asked simultaneously."Do you think we care about the flag? We just want revenge for our cabin!" They yelled at us as they charged I moved back to get my bearings, but Percy got cut a few times, before falling into the creek and going badass on them. Guess I know one of the abilities I got. Before he finished al of them, I rushed in and knocked two out with my hilt, before rushing back. After that, Luke, captain of Hermès cabin, ran through with their flag and one the game.