The Star Child (An Orville & Invincible Fanfiction) - Reviews

Nice read, looking forward to reading more of it... ...

Brain dead MC with an indestructible plot armor.People says don't go more than 3 meters deep (because its very dangerous) but he does anyway.Butts in to other peoples business for no reason and the only thing he gains is enemy.Has an opportunity to learn skills ; he chooses the books based on their names. Not even opening the book to check out the descriptions or anything.Not to mention author making mc's soul beast look like a joke so that others can mock him.OH and mc never questions about the world he lives in, techniques that he's using.(If you don't know, ask your teacher... smh)Don't bother reading this.....100ch+

Good buildup so far - as they've only released 17 chapters so far, I am optimistic that the way it's going the MC doesn't seem to be too OP. And no overbearing 2D romance leads yet, which I will count as a win. The author is doing a good job at building the sense of mystery and the supernatural in the world.Will update this as I read further / more releases come out.

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I just found this books yesterday and I already finished reading both of your work! Its just too exciting for me (and no harem)! Please keep up the good work author!

Good story with little grammar errors. The world building is detailed and the story flows at a nice pace. I binged it and read it in a day but looking at the table of content tab, you can see it has 42 chapters in less then 2 months.

"What are you trying to say?" He snapped his fingers and the tiger raised from his spot and stalked to the two lazily but with the same majesty she remembered.

As her voice resounded around the room, she was interrupted by a call.

Touching down by the foot of their legs, the cosmic blast of its tremendous radius blasted them with instant contact.. rag dolling them from their face to face contact, and back across the darkened Chard ground that skid their bodies across.

John always go to work early and come home so late at night, day pass with me spend my time to study with all of tutor that choose by him.

"Gue baik-baik aja. Gue punya temen dan keluarga yang baik."

"Oo naman, ano. Ikaw pa ba? Kahit itago mo 'yang ganda mo sa kakaibang pakulo mo, pustahan may mabibihag. Anyways. Heads up, Majesty. Mr. Zedrick Hetch is on the second floor. I think he is with his brothers. Ang guguwapo, sumilip kanina sila Nicky."