The Soul King - Reviews

First, this book still needs to be edited. The author keeps promising one, but I am past chapter 200 and it is still atrocious. Every paragraph has at least one typo. That’s not including the occasional weird, and nonsensical sentence structures, or the poorly identified conversations. It makes the book hard to read.The author does a good job with the story telling and world building. But, I am starting to see the errors in consistence that start to plaque many web novels. I am to the point I am not sure I will continue to invest my time in the story.

Hey if u read that novel and dont ser more chapters, dont worry is complete but not here, go and find in another page i read it in comrademao

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I’m gonna read this even if you tell me not to

So here's what I think... First, I thought it would be just another one of those 'knock-off' post-apocalyptic novel but as I read it, I kinda like it. Keep it up!

After my final shout, the red in my sight quickly faded, followed by my sight fading altogether. When I came to, I was back on the golden island.

Was he thinking that I was a good target to mock and taunt?

"Agreed, babe," Laine said, then kissed him. I scoffed at them, but played it off as it being towards Error.

That day, after working for a while they stopped for a mid-morning break. Vladimir sipped the electrolyte substance from his Camelbak and looked down the path from the machine they were working on. An Overseer was peering in and out of machines and had spotted them. He was walking up the hill toward them. Quickly Vladimir kicked a metal can by his foot saying oiii! Recoil.!

'11 years before what?'

Created->Designed to school->Work->Broke.

Seems like there is no Synopsis so I'll give a brief summary for those who want to know. (I'll try and give a good one but its probably gonna be kinda bad)My Synopsis: The story starts off with a man named Rean who is trunk-kuned. He dies and meets Death but is special in some way. This eventually leads to him and death reincarnating together as twins. Now this story will follow the adventures of Rean and Roan(Death) as they have to save the universe from the fate of being destroyed while they have lots of brotherly bonding :) along the way.