The Shambala Chronicles - Reviews

Very good story. Interesting and Enchanting

i enjoyed this book a lot. good job author-nim. by the way, if you have any social media that I can follow, please kindly let me know :) thank youuu

An enthralling plot and a great choice of words..

Thoroughly researched work...

Thanks to all the readers whoever are reading this story, please give me feedback and reviews in comments. To let me know if it's good or bad. I would appreciate all feedbacks to improve my writing :)

Easy reading especially if English is not your first language. It is a combination of mystery and fantasy.

The first chapter actually took me back in history about what crime used to take place. I am thankful to god that this world is better comparatively. but we still have lot to improve. Any way I must appreciate writer to bring that type of feeling in the hearts of reader. keep writing.

Amazing! Waiting to read more please update

The storyline is pretty interesting. It's good, but the ending seemed a bit unfinished. However, it's a pretty good story overall. The only big issue to warn people about, and hopefully this gets re-edited; is the syntax. It causes A LOT of misunderstandings while reading. Pronouns, sentence structure and character names are all in a jumbled mess. Honestly if my brain didn't comprehend English sentence structures it would be hard to piece a lot of what is written into something understandable. If the story wasn't pretty good, I would have stopped reading. This definitely is worth a re-edit.

Why not? I'm mean yeah the mc looking at his mother wierdly, and do some whacky staff sometime, but it has a intresthing power system, no harem, and many benevite if you continue reading this. Well if you curius i read it till the end.
Ps:horible ending don't mind the thing that i say that's all lie, but the novel is really intresting you may say until the academy arc and after that well you may read it if u curius???

what about seggs??

Can you give site link bro