The Shadow of Another World - Reviews

System novels are my guilty pleasures, especially those that have master and disciple progression models. Really looking forward to this hopefully it gets picked. ?

THE BEAST NOVEL EVER. dddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

Excellent work, Errors are few to even be found. With the few chapters I've read I've been proved that the book has great potential.

Hey!Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.

I only read to like chapter 10  (and I can usually read a good 30-40 chapters before I make my decision) and I had to stop it was so terribly cliche it wouldnt even qualify for a mediocre face slapping novel I have honestly never seen a translated work that was so cookie cutter to cultivation novel cliches and STILL not have any flavor like at all **** was literally like "oh no I'm a simp and I've been ntr'd by some young master and the girl likes him too it was a trap to take advantage of me so now she's a slut everyone around is trash and after my first near death encounter I get heavenly defying powers and don't even flinch guess all I can do is just effortlessly swat away stepping Stones for cheap power ups and any fight that would actually pose a challenge doesn't have anything to do with my skill and talent but my op powers takes care of it cause why not also don't forget that my cultivation system is vague af and all we get told is sutra name the cultivation stages literally nothing else and I have no doubt down the line (as seen in the ongoing 7k chapters) that to him these stages actually mean nothing cause when he'll get to core formation equivalant TM he'll be stronger than everybody on the planet cause of [insert nonsensical cultivation technique power up or miscellaneous power up encounter]" this is quite literally like my second or third review I've left for a book on this app and I've been around since it started and this terrible novel has made me so infuriated with it's less than mediocre quality that I typed this out...Translation quality was pretty good tho solid B at least

I CANT READ SERIOUSLY BECAUSE SHIT WRITING STYLE AND THE MC IS IDIOT AND FOOL, YOU WANT TO BUILD A KINGDOM BUT HE'S WEAK! A KING MUST BE STRONG AND JACK OF ALL TRADES AND MASTER OF NONE AND WHAT THE USE OF SYSTEM? JUST LIKE TO SEE HIS STATUS? TSK AND GAMER MIND? HE PANIC ALL THE TIME WHEN CRISIS ARISES LIKE IN THE TROLL ARC TSK WEAK

So far so good! Can't wait to read even more of this!! I am interested to see where this will go and how the characters will get along. I don't know if I will be able to wait for the updates to come around, it's like being left on a cliff hanger, and no one likes being left on a cliff hanger.

While he was treating the old man, a spiky-haired youth with a dark expression came out from the expensive car. Slamming the car door shut, he walked towards the old and young duo.

" Section 4, Next"

Shaya sonrió y sacudió la cabeza. Dio un paso adelante y llevó a Xi Xi a un lado de la piscina. Luego se quitó el traje de batalla y se preparó para ducharse.

with heavy smell of blood and metal.

Writing- It is very good, cause the way you expressed it in a documentary style.as for the updates pls Im begging nex chapter pls... nah its good just keep your own pace pls make a discord. story is somewhat good. though you already used history and add something here and there, atleast you should put a bit of of diversity from our own timeline like the part where atleast bonifacio is not dead but atleast imprisoned, or the japanese or germans aiding us discreetly because they are business rivals with the americans