The Saiyan Immortal - Reviews

a great novel overall, engaging story enough realisem and great mc.

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Honestly this novel has a lot of potential, it could be up there in the future with author's pov, But as of now it could get a lot better. Author you should put more weight into your story, for example we never knew how many students are actually attending the academy or how many teachers are teaching what subjects and how the educational system actually works, and for being called the 'best' academy it's a little bit weird how a mere C-rank could become a teacher, considering that they are teaching nobility, you know like... Noble households that are probably filled with S or SS rank members. You could also expand the main cast, I think 3-5 characters is a little bit on the small side but it wouldn't an issue if they get enough character development

Fun and different,  please update,  cover and title makes you think venom from spiderman fanfic, it's not,  please update ? your other book is fun also, but I think i'm more into this one...

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Interesting & hilarious story that won't disappoint u. In fact, read it! I hope they're not going end the story short disappointly...                                                                                             

It's the uterus's mouth

(Ella's point of view)

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The strength of the novel lies in its use of descriptive words and storytelling. Very helpful, helps visualizing the events that take place in the bookThe main plot point atp, though engaging, arrives unexpectedly leaving some of my questions unanswered. A bit fast paced but it's okay It's got potential ?and. the world building too, it's peak work

From the beginning  you can tell that the story will be a blast

The story is fantastic. Definitely a 10 out of 10 there. The character building and Arc is also definitely a 10 out of 10. World building again 10 out of 10. The English on the other hand, well it's not very good. Regular misspellings and incorrect words being used. With that being said it's not hard to understand what the author was trying to say most of the time. Dont expect the story to follow any scientific laws whatsoever though. Also while the fights are very enjoyable to read, it's almost as if a teenager is describing an anime fight not anything that would be done in real life a lot of times. With all this being said I absolutely love the story and would definitely recommend it. Overall I would score this novel a 9 out of 10. Its truly enjoyable to read, and very descriptive so it's easily visualized by the reader.