Awesome story author-chanKeep up the good work"keep a smile on your face"(＊￣︶￣＊)Update if you want too (i like this story very much Especially the female mc i even try to match her up with the males on the story)
I'm not sure what direction this novel is heading in, this is a peculiar read. The whole gimmick with this novel is despite being very generic it has a gimmick. There are system notifications for ever minor thing the protagonist does and these system notifications come with points that automatically strengthen the protagonists realm regardless of his will. The protagonist doesn't like this because his father, the emperor is a crazy jealous person and if he finds out, our protagonist is toast. A large portion of the words in this novel are just system notifications which makes this novel feel weirdly shorter than it is, it feels like gimmicky word count filler.This novel doesn't really have much going for it apart from it's bizarreness, there isn't anything about it that still feels new after the first 5 or so chapters. There isn't enough depth to it for it to be very interesting so I'm rather lukewarm on this one. 2/5.
Engaging plot with realistic characters. It's really interesting how the author switches between different time backgrounds. Really curious to read the following chapters. Nice work.
Although their hands had immediately gone to the hilt of the sword at each of their waists, the earlier drive to protect the young girl had been shaken. None of them were sure their abilities were able to protect the child in need of saving.
Ji-Eun walked through the hall in quick strides, not minding her unmade face and damp hair as she approached her office. The floor receptionist stood up and bowed in her direction when she came close and she smiled back and nodded in return.
They ran for about 20 minutes when he steered them off the path into a clump of bushes. He came down and led the horse with Van on it into a little opening. Van was scared and unstable on the horse. She was having a bout of dizziness but she didn't want to complain so she just lay down on the horse and tried to wrap her hands round its middle. It didn't quite work so she held on to the hair gently.
