I wanted to read but wasn't sure which was the original story. This one or "Revenge of the Reborn Luna. I hope the original wasn't stolen. Same exact excerpt too.
Chapters 1-5 are good, have fewer mistakes like typos and are easy to understand. But it seems that chapter 6 was rushed. It has typos and multiple points of view. At first, it was Alexis, then Tyler, then a third person. It made me confused.