The Pretty Little Ghost That Haunts a Monster - Reviews

Dear Author Sunshine,

I found your concept to the story good. Unfortunately, the paragraphs and chapters are so jumbled, making the story very confusing. My advice to you is to proofread each chapter before posting. Don’t give up on your writing! You’ll get better with more practice!

Another awsome collection from you,really love this.

whoa.... what happened to ryan how did he wake up I was looking forward seeing runa taking down Ryan's mother still confused on how runa reading elvish mean anything and her grandparents barely aging and Ace ex sounded like they weren't mates but runa was his true mate but I still enjoy reading.