The Pirate Djinn. - Reviews

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It's a decent read so far. MC is a bit OP, but I haven't seen him do anything particularly foolish or self destructive yet, so he gets a pass for now.

great novel really can't wait to see more!!!!!!!!!                                                                                         .

I don’t write reviews often but god i had to! This is a great novel for some it might seem slow but I like it better this way. It can really drive home the point of been helpless and powerless. Its one of the most realistic survival I have read, it follows a guide and plot correctly it doesn’t give you info dumps left and right but you learn with the character and follow along with his story. Great read and i hope to see it to the end!

This is my first original novel that I worked on publicly. It takes place 2000 years in the future.Main Questions1. Will there be a romance? Yes.2. Will there be a harem? Yes.3. Will there be face slapping? Yes.4. Will the be tragedies? Probably not, this will be a light hearted novel.5. Will there be s*x scenes? Yes, they are planned, the chapters will be marked (+18)6. Will the MC be OP? Yes, I will he will be, but I will try to keep him leveled without blatant nerfing.I also sometimes read comments for inspiration, so never be shy about criticism. I will also try to explain things (or fix) things if necessary.I hope you enjoy the novel!

Fastpass is going to be there for a while

He glared at her.

Fang Lin when heard this said, "Thank you.... Fairy..Feng."

SFX For ball dribbling

You should add some personality to  Yun Lin when he talks to his host and let him talk back to his host when she insults him. Like when she called him “useless” and he says something liked this “ I ain’t useless and who’s in a hospital bed. It seems to me the host is weak.”

"She probably thinks I'm a little dumb,"